Tuesday, 9 August 2011

James & Ellaine break up (:


Hey guys! This is a ROUGH DRAFT of James & Ellaine's breakup scene. We hope it made yhu cry like it did to us ): Oh, and see that little copyright sign on the bottom it means DO NOT COPY OR FEEL OUR WRATH But if yhu do copy it then jokes on yhu. It's not done yet. MWHAHAHAHAHA



"Ellaine, i need to talk to you", James said anxiously. "About what?" asked Ellaine. James hesitated, his brow furrowing in thought. 'What if i'm over reacting?'  he thought nervously to himself.  Wait what was he talking about? He was James Jones! He was always right. Most of the time. He knew this was right. "Sit down." He said to her, gesturing to a park bench. They both sat down awkwardly. Finally Ellaine folded her arms across her chest and inquired" So, whats up?" James took a deep breath. " I'ts about our...erm... relationship." He finally stated. "Our relationship?" Ellaine asked, raising one pierced eyebrow. "Yes." James replied firmly, feeling his heart pound violently in his chest. "Well go ahead then, say what you need to say." Ellaine smiled, grabbing his hand and squeezing. James sighed deeply and and slipped his hand out of Ellaine's. Then he started to speak. "When we first started going out, it was like I was seeing you in a whole new light. I loved you and you loved me...or so i thought." "But I do love you!" Ellaine interjected in disbelief. "No interruptions Ellaine!" James said firmly. "But I-" For once in your life can you just listen!" James asked angrily. Ellaine kept her mouth shut, so he assumed she understood what he was getting at. " Anyway, I thought we loved each other. Ever since you pulled me out of my murderous, bloody world, I felt that you saved my life in a way. And I fell in love with you." he swallowed, feeling uncomfortable about sharing his feelings. "But as we started dating, we kind of drifted apart. I know that since Adam and Logan died, you've been really depressed and you missed them. I tried to help, but I  could'nt help but feeling that i should leave you to mourn, because I know how it feels."
James felt tears prickle behind his eyes, but pushed them back before continuing. "As time went on, our relationship became awkward, and I think i know why. I think I loved you for what you did for me, not actually you. And well, I think you only agreed to go out with me to fill up that empty hole that Adam left when he died. We love each other as friends, not anything else." James finished speaking and looked at Ellaine's face, feeling his heart drop. She looked sad, so sad,and he felt pity.  They were both silent for a while, and every second felt like a stab in the chest. He could plainly see the tears fall down her face. What could he do? Take it all back? Finally, after ten devastating minutes, Ellaine spoke. "James you are the most rude, emotionless, kind, un-selfish person I have ever met. And your absolutely right. I miss Adam. God, i miss him so much. Just never being able to see him smile, act dumb or say something stupid is like my heart is locked into a straight-jacket and it's being squeezed to death. Like a some kind of cruel punishment." She was crying harder then James had ever seen her, and he was completely and totally shocked. He had never seen her like this. His heart contracted in despair. " I miss his laugh,his rainbow hair, even his cooking, which tasted like crap every time." And Logan, he was one of the most defensive, kind, brave people I ever met. he always wanted to protect me, but I let him die!" She choked out those last words like every breath hurt her. "I wish I had died instead" she sobbed. "i wish-" "Shush!" James quieted her, pulling her into his arms. "They're happy now." And they sat like that for a long time, just mourning, and remembering. Remembering those two amazing boys until the sun set and the world went dark.  


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